Aww. The ending is quiet, but I still think it works, and the observation that blitz is done in defiance of Sin is yet another profound insight into this world.
One of the pieces of magic in your writing is that you manage so much by simple description, since Kimahri doesn't talk much. Simple in that you don't have a florid style, but a very immersive one, drawing readers into this alien environment as Kimahri is half alien, and half very deeply attuned to his surroundings in ways the humans aren't.
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Date: 2006-11-15 07:52 am (UTC)One of the pieces of magic in your writing is that you manage so much by simple description, since Kimahri doesn't talk much. Simple in that you don't have a florid style, but a very immersive one, drawing readers into this alien environment as Kimahri is half alien, and half very deeply attuned to his surroundings in ways the humans aren't.