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Date: 2006-11-15 03:15 pm (UTC)
What a relief to be rid of Yuna for a brief spell. This is excellent, learnng more of the Ronso culture is always a joy.

There are two spots at which I became confused.
"the Ronso secret of disguise." - what do you mean by this?
"stepped back as the spear swung, stay up at the snow." - the last phrase makes no sense to me.
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