Teehee, poor Lana and having to deal with Traverse Town! I love her personality and her inner monologue. It's so fun to read~!
This felt a little scattered and had some confusing typos, but nothing a read-through wouldn't fix. And Lana is lovely, which can make up for many things ^^
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Date: 2005-07-05 03:15 am (UTC)This felt a little scattered and had some confusing typos, but nothing a read-through wouldn't fix. And Lana is lovely, which can make up for many things ^^