First, a couple of nits to get them out of the way.
Sand 'between' his feet? Should it not be sand 'beneath' his feet or 'between' his toes?
Crusaders do not fight 'for' Sin but 'against' it.
Yes, the telling details are delightful, just as Auronlu says. You have a knack for making the surroundings come alive. May I say I did not expect such endless patience from Kimahri. I would not blame him if he took Yuna's face off. Of course he would later regret it, but I would have such a feeling of release reading such a scene. ;)
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Date: 2006-11-15 03:06 pm (UTC)Sand 'between' his feet? Should it not be sand 'beneath' his feet or 'between' his toes?
Crusaders do not fight 'for' Sin but 'against' it.
Yes, the telling details are delightful, just as Auronlu says. You have a knack for making the surroundings come alive. May I say I did not expect such endless patience from Kimahri. I would not blame him if he took Yuna's face off. Of course he would later regret it, but I would have such a feeling of release reading such a scene. ;)
Lovely work, as usual.