I hope you're stringing these all together and posting them on a fanfic archive as one story; it's quiet, but one of those fanfics so true to character that having read it, I can never think of these events as having happened another way.
Yuna wanting to slip out without talking to anyone, and Kimahri understanding, is particularly touching. In a way, he understands the feeling from recent experiences.
Second chapter: "but when [she] felt like crying as others laughed" "Together, a tower **of** made of a human girl and her enormous guardian"
First chapter: A few misplaced "it's". Its = a possessive pronoun, like his, her, your, my, our. They're possessive by nature, so they don't need apostrophes. An apostrophe is used to turn an ordinary noun into a possessive (John's, cat's) or to indicate a dropped letter in a contraction (it's = "it is").
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Yuna wanting to slip out without talking to anyone, and Kimahri understanding, is particularly touching. In a way, he understands the feeling from recent experiences.
Second chapter:
"but when [she] felt like crying as others laughed"
"Together, a tower **of** made of a human girl and her enormous guardian"
First chapter:
A few misplaced "it's". Its = a possessive pronoun, like his, her, your, my, our. They're possessive by nature, so they don't need apostrophes. An apostrophe is used to turn an ordinary noun into a possessive (John's, cat's) or to indicate a dropped letter in a contraction (it's = "it is").