My word, what an extraordinary story. I would never have thought it possible to mine Calli for so much understanding. My profound congratualations! You have made her a real person and have utilized the chocobos in ways never approached before. Of course, it is not unique for the care takers of animals to come to identify with their charges but this is quite remarkable in the reflections from the woman to the birds and back again. And what a pairing you suggest here! Hah!

It is perfectly delicious. ;)

One nit - "Calli lays on the roof" - should be 'lies'.